Poetry

The Humbleness Of The Earth’s Dynasty At My Feet

Posted by Aubrey's Arch on

There was no greater love than this

We came to this enormous place

natural on stilts, Beauty of the gods

They showed me the depths of plates shifts

beneath the eye of see, the sea then came beneath

my feet to look and lift my gaze to natural castles

from earth shifts, magic wonders equivalent

5.29.15

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  1. Nilzeitung's avatar nilzeitung says:
    May 30, 2015 at 9:04 pm

    Reblogged this on Nilzeitung.

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    1. Aubrey's Arch's avatar aubreysarch says:
      May 30, 2015 at 9:16 pm

      Very much appreciated.

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      1. Nilzeitung's avatar nilzeitung says:
        May 30, 2015 at 9:27 pm

        many thanks.

  2. thesingingduck2013's avatar thesingingduck2013 says:
    May 31, 2015 at 11:35 am

    magnificant

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    1. Aubrey's Arch's avatar aubreysarch says:
      May 31, 2015 at 3:29 pm

      Thanks so much.

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  3. mrsorenson's avatar mrsorenson says:
    June 1, 2015 at 2:06 pm

    Touched on lightly, left shadowy. I find this poem delicately manipulative. Thanks.

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    1. Aubrey's Arch's avatar aubreysarch says:
      June 1, 2015 at 5:40 pm

      Very well descripted… and much appreciated is your view. Thank you.

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