Poetry

Pasty White Sailor

Posted by Aubrey's Arch on

Lost at sea

You found me

Here I correlate

A massive monologue

Dense the smog, by fog of law

I’m just lost here working on The Throne

Stark charter and dark water… Sail in 3, 2, 1

2.2.15

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  1. Melting Ice Towers's avatar Melting Ice Towers says:
    March 25, 2015 at 1:58 pm

    Amazing one i love it

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    1. Aubrey's Arch's avatar aubreysarch says:
      March 25, 2015 at 2:36 pm

      Thank you very much 🙂

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      1. Melting Ice Towers's avatar Melting Ice Towers says:
        March 25, 2015 at 3:51 pm

        Welcome

  2. mrsorenson's avatar mrsorenson says:
    March 25, 2015 at 8:25 pm

    I hear in this poem a massive and dense experience reduced but not lessened to poem form. It carries. It conveys. It appeals. It acknowledges. This fine monologue straddles self and other with the most delicate mastery. Lovely poetic work!

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    1. Aubrey's Arch's avatar aubreysarch says:
      March 25, 2015 at 10:19 pm

      Humbled. Truly. Your words extend deep…. I thank you.

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