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  1. Amazing one i love it

    1. Aubrey's Arch's avatar aubreysarch says:

      Thank you very much 🙂

  2. mrsorenson's avatar mrsorenson says:

    I hear in this poem a massive and dense experience reduced but not lessened to poem form. It carries. It conveys. It appeals. It acknowledges. This fine monologue straddles self and other with the most delicate mastery. Lovely poetic work!

    1. Aubrey's Arch's avatar aubreysarch says:

      Humbled. Truly. Your words extend deep…. I thank you.

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